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The words 'coordination', 'each' and 'hold' are not idiomatic. The word 'global' is confusing. The word 'typically' is wrong. The phrase 'These are typically a 1.5 day "mini-conference"' is grammatically wrong because a plural form is equaled to a singular form. The words 'talks' and in particular 'social events' are vague. a year ago |
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In 'in coordination with the release' is 'coordination' not idiomatic. a year ago |
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The words 'coordination', 'each' and 'hold' are not idiomatic. The word 'global' is confusing. The word 'typically' is wrong. The phrase 'These are typically a 1.5 day "mini-conference"' is grammatically wrong because a plural form is equaled to a singular form. The words 'talks' and in particular 'social events' are vague.
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Two times a year, in connection with the release of a new version of Fedora Linux, we give virtual parties around the world. These parties are often small conferences that take one and a half day, and they have lectures and social events.
Two times a year, in connection with the release of a new version of Fedora Linux, we give virtual parties around the world. These parties are often small conferences that take one and a half day, and they have lectures and social events.
a year ago